In my tummy I felt excited to go down the stairs. I loved the leaves falling on me. It was ticklish. Some of the nature trail was dark.
By Jessica
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What a great little story Jessica.I really liked it.Great work keep it up. :)
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thanayou Graciana
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wow jessica what a great story .cool work :)
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Thanayou Nawal i am so happy
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Wow I love the adgetives you used to discribe things.
ReplyDeleteI think this is a great poem!
ReplyDeleteyou should write more poems!!!:)
That story had a lot of details.
ReplyDeleteI really liked it! I really liked the great words you added! Keep up the good work!
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I like it.
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I also like it when that happens. Whats your favorite part aboot it. Mine is when the leaves fall and you walk through them.
ReplyDeleteThat was a good story! I like nature trails too! They are fun to go on! I love leaves falling on me, too! You're right! They tickle me too!
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Wow i hope that was a poem because that is what I am calling it. Good Job!
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