Room 12 are learning how to 'dress up sentences' to make our writing more interesting for our readers.
We take a simple sentence with a noun and a verb and we add adjectives to dress up the noun and adverbs to dress up the verb. We can then add more detail to make the sentences really paint a picture in our readers mind!
Molly
The lady drove.
The old lady drove away badly.
Kaedyn
The clown danced.
The menacing clown danced to some creepy circus music.
Aleah.
My hair smells.
My curly blonde hair smells like an old, mouldy dead body.
Paras
The bat flew.
The scared bat flew quickly through the dense night.
Taylor
The man ate
The rich man ate disgustingly on the floor.
Saleh
The man swam.
The young man swam quickly to the island.
Christopher
The bee buzzed.
The dancing bee buzzed happily to the music.
Harper
The policeman drove.
The scary policeman happily drove Donald Trump away.
Makayla
My fish swam.
My excited goldfish swam circles around his bowl.
Luci
The bird flew away.
The blue bird flew speedily away from the cat.
Ruby-mei
The pig rolled.
The old fashioned pig rolled slowly into the 1950's.
Bella C
The zebra galloped.
The crazy zebra slowly galloped into a tree.
Elijah
The owl flew.
The owl with pitch black eyes flew silently into the night.
Bella K
The mouse ran.
The scary, rainbow mouse slowly ran straight into the smelly cheese.
Hamsa
The boy threw the ball.
The red shirted boy threw the heavy ball straight at his mum's car and got into trouble.
Aaliyah
The ice-cream melted.
The chocolate ice-cream melted dramatically in the sun.
Fine
The fireman yelled.
The cool fireman yelled 'emergency' loudly.
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