Here is some more Procedural Writing by Room 11. We have some great ideas about activites you can do anytime. What would you chose?
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We think it is a good idea to put pictures to help the readers.
ReplyDeleteWe like it how you have used descriptive words.
I wonder how you could check it so it makes sense before you publish it?
I really liked how you used lots of correct punchuation in your writing.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you used google slides to make your presentation.
I wonder how better it would be if you proof read it before publishing.
I liked that you included the photos in the slide because it helped me understand what it was about.
ReplyDeleteIt was easy to understand and follow the steps to do it.
Would you be able to prof read the writing before you post it next time.
I love everyone's procedural writing they are something that I want to do in the next holiday
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I really like you made a list of stuff like how to buy a ted witch was my favorite but i am sure my mum and dad would probable not buy it but it's still cool.
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