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Stu Duval is such a fantastic storyteller. We love how he captured our attention with words, actions and sound effects. He uses humou... -
This morning Room 12 spent some time looking in awe at the Redwood tree. We decided to see if we could get the whole class round the base of... -
Today we went swimming for the first time this year in our school pool. Here are some pictures of us swimming. Today we did bottom dives w...
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ReplyDeleteroom13.
The instructions are very clear and I know what you are talking about. I think I could follow those instructions myself. I wonder how you could make the green text more clear to read?
ReplyDeleteWe liked how you did not make any mistakes in your writing. Make sure to proof read and edit your writing.I loved the photos , great work. We also liked the way you used bossy verbs .
ReplyDeleteThe picture we used in the procedure were very fun and interesting. also the one I made is called 'Going to Waiheke island' also instructions were clear and step by step. I think you should read your procedure again 2 - 4 times. -Luca RM11 HES
ReplyDeleteI liked everyones procedural writing it was interesting to look at.For some of them it was sort of funny but i liked how everyone used adjectives and bossy verbs.
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