Thursday, December 9, 2021

Writing Competition

 This year some writers from Room 11 participated in the IWA essay writing competition for years 5- 8.

The theme was 'You, me and the Media' and was based on the effects of mass media.

The students worked really hard to understand what the meaning of this was and what it meant to them personally. 

All of our submissions were fantastic pieces of writing and I am proud to say that Kiera Ennion from Room 11 received a 'Commended' for her piece about her experiences of the difference in mass media during covid times in China and New Zealand.

Have a look at the website to read the winning submissions when they are posted, and here is Kiera's writing.


Living in China when Covid started and how mass

media was used to inform us



I had just moved back to China in January 2020, when Covid hit.

China identified it’s first cases of Covid on 31 December 2019 in

Wuhan city, but they didn’t name it 2019-nCov until 7 January 2020.

Most people didn’t hear about it until mid-end of January. Once

my family and I heard about it, we weren’t too worried at first,

because we thought it wasn’t that contagious. That is, until late

January when we started getting messages every day from

the government. They used mass media to share propaganda

messages on TV, phones, social media, and even on signs

and banners everywhere you went. The government sent messages like:


"Those who gather together are shameless; those who

play mahjong are daredevils."                

 

"Have a bite of a wild animal dish today, see you in hell

tomorrow."

 

"Returning to your hometown with the virus means

you're unfilial; passing the virus to parents means

you're utterly devoid of conscience."


These messages might sound strange, but I think they

worked because there was hardly anyone outside, which

felt very eerie. Especially because there were 8 million people

living in the city that we were in, which is way more than the

population of New Zealand! 


We had 1000 neighbours living around our courtyard in

apartment buildings that were about 18 stories high. Usually

the courtyard was full of children playing, skipping with ropes,

biking and scootering. There were also lots of older people

who would exercise in the courtyard. It wouldn’t be how

we exercise in New Zealand, but more Chinese type exercise,

which is like slapping any part of your body while walking, or

doing dancing or martial arts. But after the outbreak of Covid,

the most you would see in the courtyard would be around 5 people.

It was a little sad that we couldn’t play with our friends.

 

Day by day, things changed. Food was harder to get and fresh

markets were closed. We had to wear masks for a long time which

I felt very frustrated wearing, because your face gets sweaty and

since I have asthma, it is hard to breathe in the mask. It was really

hard to find masks, because everyone tried to buy them and it also

did not help that there were more than 1.398 billion people living

in China.  


All the gates out of our apartment complex were closed, except for one,

and we couldn’t get out of our complex unless we had our temperature

checked. My parents got too scared to let me go out the gate with them,

which I found out afterwards, was very responsible, because if I had a

fever, a van would take me straight away to isolate in a hospital,

with no parents! And since I haven’t learnt that many words in

Mandarin Chinese, they might have given me food that has dairy in

it, which I am allergic to! I think that I am very lucky to have responsible

parents.


There were some elements of life in China with Covid that I found pretty

weird and funny, like when there was Glad Wrap covering the numbers

in the elevator. I don’t know how that was going to stop Covid spreading,

but I think that whoever put the Glad Wrap on the elevator was very

scared and anxious after hearing the propaganda messages. Though

I would like to know who ever put the Glad Wrap on, what their

opinion was, and how they thought it could stop Covid from spreading.


In complete contrast, I experienced lock down in New Zealand as well.

I went out for walks, did some biking, played outside - but not on the

playground, and listened to the 1pm news when Jacinda Ardern said

things like “we can do this together” or “be strong and be kind”

which was completely different to what was said in China, and I felt

much safer in New Zealand than in China. But I did miss China alot.


I have experienced Covid 19 and how mass media is used by

governments in two very different countries. Both governments used

it to stop the spread, China’s government used it to make us too

scared to go out, and New Zealand’s government used it to make

us work as a team. Some Chinese have now stopped trusting

their government because the message has got confused. 


In conclusion, mass media can be used in scary ways or more

gentle ways, but imagine if we didn’t have mass-media. Would many

more people have died, because they didn’t know about Covid and how to

stop it spreading?



References:


Population of China (2019) -

https://datacommons.org/place/country/CHN?utm_medium=explore&

mprop=count&popt=Person&hl=en


China's Red Banners Take On Coronavirus. Even Mahjong

Gets A Mention - https://www.npr.org/sections/goatsandsoda

/2020/03/01/805760905/chinas-red-banners-take-on-coronavirus

-even-mahjong-gets-a-mention

COVID-19: Prime Minister Jacinda Ardern's message to New

Zealand as Auckland plunges into lockdown - https://www.newshub.

co.nz/home/new-zealand/2021/02/covid-19-prime-minister-jacinda

-ardern-s-message-to-new-zealand-as-auckland-plunges-into-lockdown.html




2 comments:

  1. Wow Kiera, simply no words but WOW for this amazing piece of essay writing!!!!!!
    Riley

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  2. Amazing Writing piece Kiera. I was so interested when reading that.

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