Our final piece of procedural writing was to write a Revolting Recipe based on a poem.
Be warned they are really revolting!!
Please leave us a comment about our learning and whether you think we have achieved our goal.
Goal:
To write a Revolting Recipe
To include ingredients which are listed
To include a method which is numbered
To use 'bossy' verbs
To use correct punctuation
That is a really discussing recipe and I know I'm not going to eat it at all because it's gross. Why would you make someone do that?
ReplyDeleteWe did this based on a book called "Revolting Rhymes" by Roald Dahl, because we were working on procedural writing.
DeleteFrom Tylah-Dawnn Room 11
Wow ! that is great . Hi my name is Wynstan I am one of your quad bloggers . I think that you have certainly achieve that goal and made is very revolting as it can be . I would like it if I eat it but it will be fun to make it . It is very interesting how you made it so revolting and yucky .
ReplyDeleteThanks thats a good thing you think it's really revolting and yucky, thats what we were going for.
DeleteMaybe next time we'll go grosser.
Courtney rm11
GROSE what disgusting poems nearly made me be sick
ReplyDeleteapart from that very creative
Jaden rm11
Reading all of these revolting recipes again is even more sickening than the first time. I think we all did really gross jobs at it.
ReplyDeleteCourtney Room11
EEWW what some gross recipes you created. They were all very disgusting i wouldn't eat any of them EVER!!!Just remember to change some of the fonts so they are not all capitals. Well done room11 on your creativity.
ReplyDeleteAlyssa room11